Who is he?

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Mar 10

Who is he? (By Asu29494) (Thanked: 27 times)

Prologue


She gulped the air as much as possible. Her system needed extreme oxygen due to her over running. It's dark everywhere. She feared of darkness. But nothing matters now. She has to run far away from that monster. Hell she doesn't know where he brought her. Whatever direction she turned she could only see dense forest with only moon light to guide her way.



She took sharp breath when she heard the wolf's howl. She closed her mouth fearing her sobs will led the animal towards her. She doesn't want to be the dinner of wolf after escaping from the monster. 



She wished she could find a way out of this damn place. It's scaring the hell out of her. 



She ran some more minutes but it seemed like this forest never ends. Her breath hitched when she heard the moment of the animal near to her. She hid behind the tree. She took baby steps backwards rounding tree believing that she is successful in her hiding. 



She bones frozen when felt something behind her. She turned slowly only to find the hungry wolf starting at her making its own plan to make her it's prey. 



Both are staring each others eyes one with hunger and other with atmost fear. The eye to eye contact didn't last even for a minute before that she passed out collapsing on the ground. 







Just an idea came. I hope you like it.  Friends it's not any dark or ghost story. It's just a normal story with little weird things. So tell me hows it.


One more thing as I said before I can't handle more stories at a time so I thought to give updates alternatively. Is that ok with you guys.




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Mar 16

Chapter 1 (By Asu29494) (Thanked: 40 times)



"Kushi...... Kushi......." Ria shouted from outside. 



"Coming..."a cute crispy girl of 18 came running out of the house wearing one chappal and holding other in her hand. 



"Oh kushi first put that down and hurry up the movie will start" Ria said pointing the chappal that Kushi is holding as if she is going to beat her with that and started the scooty.



Giving her a sheepish grin Kushi put on her another chappal. Climbing the Scooty she shouted near Ria's ears.



"Chachi I'm going for the movie. See you soon" she waved at her chachi who was watering the plants. 



"Come soon beta"



"Kushi you will make me deaf one day" Ria chided.



"Haaan Haan now go otherwise we will be late. I won't spare you if I miss the introduction" she said as if Ria was the one who got late.



"Youuuuuu, I will see you later"Ria stopped not wanting to miss the movie fighting with her. They moved to watch their favorite salaman khan movie.



They both enjoyed the movie very much. Kushi kept on talking about the move all the way. Ria had no other option but to hear her blabbering. 



"Ria stop.....stop......stop......."she shouted as if earthquake occurred.



"What happened kushi?"Ria asked putting a sudden break.



"See there"she pointed to man who was lying unconscious on the road. There was no one as it was a deserted road.



"Let's help him"kushi jumped off the scooty.



"Kushi no need for that come let's go"Ria said not wanting to take any unwanted risk that too on a deserted road but before that Kushi reached the man.



"Kushi no he seems like drunken" Ria said as it will the cause most of the times.



"Are you stupid Ria, he is just unconscious not drunken. Go get the water bottle"



She made him sit leaning on the near by post. She sprinkled some water on his face. His was hairy only little part of his face was visible. 



He seemed to be young. She wondered whether any guy will like to grow hair like him covering most his face. 



He slowly opened his eyes. She waved her hand before him to gain his attention, he looked at her. She offered him some water. He grabbed the bottle from her and gulped the water as if he was thirsty for ages. 



"Are you ok" After he finished the bottle she asked him slowly. He again looked at her but didn't opened his mouth. 



He stood up and walked away without a word giving her a last look. 



"Awwww he didn't even say a thank you, idiot" she huffed.



"Didn't I tell you to just leave" Ria raised her brows.



"Whatever I don't care. I just wanted to help and I did that. I think he didn't learned any manners" she cursed him.



"Maharani if you are done, shall we go home"Ria gave a sarcastic smile to her. Both of them headed back home. Her prises of salman movie was replaced by cursing the man. Poor Ria she got blood in her ears.





Londoner, Angel23, Lily30, sujesan61, Noordina, Candie, Spriya, Thethinker thank you friends thanks for your comments. Thanks to all the readers.



No dears it not a werewolf story. But it's seems to be a good idea I will try to write a werewolf story. I don't have much idea about that if you guys have any suggestions please drop it on "contact me" area. Thank you once again. Love you all



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chapter 2 (By Asu29494) (Thanked: 26 times)



It's their friends' birthday today, Kushi and Ria both went there to enjoy to heart content. 



But after some time kushi got bored she wanted to get back home. She searched for Ria in the hall. Her eyes spotted her in the corner talking with her boyfriend. 



She approached Ria.



"Ria"she called her by tapping her shoulder. There's no way anyone can hear other in that loud music.



"Haan Kushi"Ria moved little away from her boyfriend and came close to kushi to hear her.



"Ria I'm going back to home"kushi said in her ears.



"But Why?"Ria asked her wondering what happened to her suddenly.



"My head is paining like hell yaar, so I'm going back home"she said holding her head in her hands.



"Ok wait I'm coming"Ria said and searched for her belongings.



"No no, no need for that I will be fine"she don't want to spoil their moment.



"Aree Kushi it's too late wait I will come"Ria said all concerned.



"Oh hello madam keep your concern yourself. I'm not a kid I can manage myself. Go, go and enjoy with your boyfriend" Kushi winked at her.



"Haan Haan Meri maa, here take the keys. Call me after reaching home"Ria folded her hands dramatically and handed the keys to kushi.



"Ok ok"Kushi took the keys and headed back home.



The road was deserted, who would be out at this time that too in this killing chilling weather.



When she was half the way she heard a loud "pucccccchhhhhhh"and her scooty stopped. ok it's not that loud but in that deathly silence it's loud.



"What the, don't it have any other time to get punctured" she groaned in frustration. Where will she get help or other vehicle at this time. She walked pulling her punctured scooty.



"God this sky is so scary"she said looking around the darkness engulfed Streets. The only light source to led her path was three days old moon and some stars.



"You stupid Kushi what's the need to  reject Ria's company."she scolded herself for not taking Ria with her.



" It would have been better I she was with me. But I can't spoil their moment"she pouted.



While walking she felt someone following her. She turned to look at person but there was none to be seen. She thought it may be her hallucination. 



Already fear stared budding in her heart but taking some bravery notes  in her mind she continued her walking.



Again she felt someone behind her. But there is no one there. She was all alone in that dark street. 



She stared walking fast. Her breath hitched when see saw a shadow in that pale moon light. Her body started sweating badly even in that cold weather. 



Before she acknowledge what's happening, someone closed her mouth and nose from behind with a kerchief. In few seconds she fell unconscious.





So here it goes guys tell me how is it. I think this month my good stars had taken a off. Then what, first sprain then cold and now I feel feverish. I wish my stars come back from their vacation soon. Bye friends try to catch you soon. Love you all.



Hearty thanks for all my readers.


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chapter 3 (By Asu29494) (Thanked: 40 times)

Hi dears, did you missed me? I'm so sorry for making you wait this long. I hope I can give you regular updates now onwards. Thanks for your support.



I will update "you are my everything" soon. Until enjoy this one.



When she opened her eyes she was greeted with the same sealing. Rubbing her eyes she put her foot down the bed. Still she didn't get rid of her headache. 



"Aaaahhh my head" she held her head in both hands. She opened the drawer to find tablets that could help her get rid of this irritating headache. 

 

She saw some paper on the table. Wondering what's written in that. She took that, a beautiful handwriting greeted her. 



"Take the tablet after the breakfast"was written in it. Then only she noticed a small packet under a bowl closed with a lid. 



"Why chacha-chachi left a note? Did they gone some where....... maybe" she shrugged.



She dragged her legs lazily towards the bathroom. After freshing up she gulped the food sitting on the bed. Oh man how hungry she was. It tasted different, not bad but tasty like tasty never before.



She fell back again on the bed. Sleeping for extra 4 hours. 



She got up hearing the birds crisping sound.



"Wow what a beautiful evening" she enjoyed the beautiful evening still on the bed through the window. 



That's when reality stroke her like lightning. She sat up instantly. Throwing the blanket away she rushed towards the window. 



She could see tall green trees and bushes around. The seen was breathe taking. But it's not the place where she lived. The sight through her window was Ria's house not a forest. 



She turned again to check the room. Everything was same. 



"Aaahhhhh what's going on? Am I dreaming or something" she ran to the washroom and splashed the water on her face again and again. 



When she came out again nothing changed. 



"Wait, chachi never leave notes. And I know her handwriting well" she took the paper and examined it. She is sure that it's not her aunt, uncle or Ria's handwriting. Hell she never seen that before.



"Headache is far better than this confusion. Uuurrrrggggg kushi you have definitely gone mad" throwing the paper away she went to open the door. But it's not opening. 



She banged the door numerous times but nothing happened. Her calls for help never heard by anyone. Exhausted she sat there by the door burring her face pulling her legs to her chest. 



Last night incidents flashed before her eyes. Her eyes gone wide, horror filled her every cell. 







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chapter 4 (By Asu29494) (Thanked: 36 times)



She couldn't understand anything. When she opened her eyes this morning she don't even remembered that happened last night. 



Still she couldn't get what's going on around her. 



If someone have kidnapped her according to last night incidents, why will they keep her in room that looked exactly like hers? 



If that was just a horrible nightmare then why she was struck in this room? 



Why no one is answering her shouts? 



Where were her chacha-chachi?

 

Where did Ria's house disappeared?



Where the hell is she?

 

Why she is not waking up from this damn sleep to get back to her normal life?



Her head busted out with questions but had no answer. She pulled her hair in frustration.



Exhausted both physically and mentally she fell asleep by the door. 



The darkness killed every single source of light. 



There was darkness everywhere but not silence. There were sounds of insects, wild animals but not a single human. 



Those horrible sounds took her sleep far away. She don't even had the courage to blink her lids once. Thin skin of tear formed in her hazel eyes.



She feared of darkness but didn't dared to look for a light source. She curled up herself in one corner of the room.



She heard the screech sound of door opening. She plastered herself to the wall even more.



An yellow dim light entered the room through the door there stood a man blocking the light. She couldn't figure out whose that in that dim light, her teary eyes is not helping her either. 



He took slow steps towards her. She tightened her grip over the vase which she took for her self defence. Thought she is hell scared she was determined to knock out whoever dared to kidnap her. 



Gathering all her strength she ran towards him and hit him hardly with the vase on his head. He fell on the ground groaning. She ran out of the place as fast as her leg could take her.



After running a considerable distance. She held on to the tree for support. Her legs shooting with pain. Leaning on the tree she gulped the air as much as possible. Her system needed extreme oxygen due to her over running. It's dark everywhere. Her loneliness and fear of darkness didn't mattered anymore. She has to run far away from that monster. Hell she doesn't know where he brought her. Whatever direction she turned she could only see dense forest with only moon light to guide her way.



She took sharp breath when she heard the wolf's howl. She closed her mouth fearing her sobs will led the animal towards her. She doesn't want to be the dinner of wolf after escaping from the monster. 



She wished she could find a way out of this damn place. It's scaring the hell out of her. 



She ran some more minutes but it seemed like this forest never ends. Her breath hitched when she heard the moment of the animal near to her. She hid behind the tree. She took baby steps backwards rounding tree believing that she is successful in her hiding. 



She bones frozen when felt something behind her. She turned slowly only to find the hungry wolf starting at her making its own plan to make her it's prey. 



Both are staring each others eyes one with hunger and other with atmost fear. The eye to eye contact didn't last even for a minute before that she passed out collapsing on the ground. 





Thank you very much for your support.

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sorry readers (By Asu29494) (Thanked: 10 times)

Sorry dears I'm going to stop this story.



Don't panic I'm not dropping just stopping for some time. You know I'm bad in handling more than one story. I thought I could manage but no I can't. So I'm shifting it to my blog and it will be removed from here. Once I finish "you are my everything" I will post it back here again. 



With God's grace if I find some time and write any update for this story I  will post on my blog because I can't promise you when will be the next update. I don't want to make you wait for so long, so only this decision. Now I'm concentrating in "you are my everything" completely. You can ask why I chose "you are my everything" over this story. Simple that's having more response than this.



Forgive me for doing this. But really I can't handle two at a time. Its really very confusing and I'm not that intelligent to handle both at a time. 

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