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Sep 22

RAAZ!!! (By Fathimasumaiya19) (Thanked: 34 times)

Hi reader dears..as we all know I written all shades of stories like romantic to family.emotional to drama..even love with humour..so this time I thought to give something new to explore..a horror thriller filled dangerous love tale..so let's join with me...

Every tales have some secrets behind it.even if it small or big..some secrets won't effect anything to us..but there some secrets which can be turn our lives upside..even its have power of destroy our whole birth.. and even there some secrets which can be run and hunt us from past..now let's see how this RAAZ which connected arnav khushi forever return to them again with new dangerous,suspension journey.....

Guys this story going to be really thriller and horror..and importantly suspension..I won't say proudly but it's going to be really horror..cause myself scared when writing this script..but it's will be big present for all horror stories lovers..

And as regular it's going to be highly romantic and intimate story..not much mature..but it's will be more prefect for above 18..giving silent warning my duty..

Dears I know there all stories of mine still ongoing...but don't worry..I will update daily if you all give decent votes and comments to my stories..if you all show me supports I will updates daily..its promise..


Some lonely place in kullu manali..an young couple traveling on car alone..it's really late and dark night..no any vehicles  look to see expect their car..snow filled everywhere..when they driving talking way suddenly they saw someone standing front of their car wrapping black showl..the boy got panic and hurriedly turn the car to other direction..unexpectedly he hit the car on tree..both really panicked now..two get down from car and look someone for help..girl told her husband scared way..

Girl: mahesh I am really scared ! What we're going to do now..our car also break down...

Mahesh:( comfort tone ) meera don't be scared..I am with you na..don't worry..we will find someone for help..

Mahesh hug meera and comfort her..suddenly both sense tight brightness from behind..they turn and shocked to seeing such a big palace front of them..it's almost looking like big castle..both of them completely fall on palace beauty..slowly they move towards the palace..now both standing on entrance..the palace filled with full of lights..it's looking like some weddings going to held..when they try to knock the door,saw it's already opened..both got inside the palace..they two got more weak looking the inside beauty..it's truly a castle..mehera spoke out in gasps..

Meera : oh my goddess..mahesh I never see such a big palace in my entire life..look at this palace beauty..it's looking like some castle..

Mahesh:( same tone ) ha mehera.. I also feeling the same..I never know kullu manali have such a big palace..this is really gorgeous..

Meera: but who is this palace belong too ..here no on to see..looking the decorations I thing some wedding going to held..but here nothing looking like that ..where's everyone?

When they both thinking for answer..suddenly bunches of giggling sound arch everywhere..both jerked by sudden sound..both look around and saw there no one to see..again the same giggling sound arch everywhere..but this time little harder..somewhere they both scared to be there..it's not giving good signs..when they try to go out..suddenly both hear someone crying sound from upstairs..scared sweat spreading on their face hearing that..because it's not look normal..it's like someone crying in deep hurt..mahesh try to go upstairs but Meera hold his hand quickly...

Meera:( full of scared  ) no mahesh..please don't go..l am not feeling good here ..lets go from here..please come..

Hearing her pleading he stopped and both decided to go.when try to go they saw the door already locked..and it's looking like it's locked from many years ..the door covered with full of dusts messes..they shocked seeing the view..suddenly all lights start to blink..it's start to went off one by one..now it's nerve racking..both scared to death..both try to move towards door..an thud shake whole palace..same hard grip hold they both and drag them upstair with such a force..they scream for help.. But no one can hear them..that force take them to very high..both catch breath seeing now they on terrace..two don't know what's going to happen next..they didn't get a chance to think..before that someone pushed them from terrace..next second the palace got dark..it's become appear like,it's closed from years..someone from terrace slowly start        To disappear..no one to see anywhere..because this is the palace where Rajput palace close for 80 years..the palace which holding so much raaz..no one dare to came that area after evening time..it's waiting to be opened by someone..maybe one practical person..lets see.

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Sep 30

Raaz.... (By Fathimasumaiya19) (Thanked: 47 times)

In Delhi shantivan...upstair..a man in late twenties sleeping bare body..he sleeping on stomach and his body covered till lower waist with bedsheet..his thick loose hair carelessly falling on eyes..his ****y poster just killing to see..the morning Ray hit his face..he frown on sleep..without opening eyes he search someone beside him..but feeling the cold bed beside him his frown became wider..he opened his intense brown eyes..this going to be worst day for him..because he didn't get beautiful view of his gorgeous wife..without think anything he yelled top of voice..

                ”KHUSHI......KHUSHI "

In kitchen...an beautiful girl early on twenties with fair skin,wearing long full sleeve transparent yellow saree..she let her hair fall naturally..shinning mangalasustra adoring her long neck amazingly..her forehead brighting with dark sindoor..her left hand finger flashing in diamond ring..totally she looking like newly wedded women..khushi shook her head hearing her hottie husband early morning shout..she stopped her work and rushed to their room...

She enter to room and saw her husband still laying with bare body..he continually calling her..before her wake other members she quickly sit beside him..feeling his wife warmth he turn and lay on her lap..she hit his head lightly..

Khushi: arnav ji!!how many times I told you don't shout like this..naniji sleeping after return from satsang last night..she might be wake hearing your yelling..what will I say to them..you never hear my words arnav ji..

Arnav:(complaint tone) even j can say that to you..how many times I told you,I don't like to welcome my day without seeing you first..you know well how much I hate the fact not seeing you in bed morning..until you change your habit I won't change mine..

He stubbornly told her,.she sigh hearing him..he looking her with baby face..she smile meltingly seeing his face...who can say this is same arnav singh raizada who is no.1 business man in India,who was arrogant beast to this world ,who scared his employees to death having this baby side front of her..on one believe this great ASR have this side too..and specially front of his wife..she kissed his forehead and told him softly..

Khushi: accha baba I'm sorry..I won't do this again..now come on wake up.its time for breakfast..come on..

He lazily get up from her lap and hugged her tightly..he nuzzles his face on her neck like baby..khushi smile at her husband cuteness..she softly kissed his cheek and cuddle him caring way..he smile feeling his soft warmth..this is what he craves from morning bed..somewhere he gets mother warmth from her..after few lovely dovely kisses he finally get up and went to washroom..then khushi went to arrange breakfast for all..

After fresh up arnav come downstairs in casual cloth..today he took off from office..past one week he was hell busy because of new deal..finally he free..his wife strictly asked his to take two days off.as lovesick husband he obedient her order..today all present in house and already all awake..soon everyone join to dining hall..khushi start to serve arnsv..after serving him she took seat beside him and served herself,.everyone have breakfast with little normal chats..

After having breakfast all join to living hall..Mami,Nani chatting each other,anjali payal talking with their husbands..(Shyam good here,he didn't stay with guptas,his meeting with khushi just happened on Lucknow))seeing that everyone busy on their own lands arnav take khushi to their room..he bring her to room and closed the door..both settled on bed..soon arnav kiss her neck and try to remove her saree..she hit his hand and lightly pushed him away..

Khushi: arnav ji you always think about this na..not now..stop your naughtiness..

Arnav:(pout sadly) khushi it's not fair..last night to you allowed me to do just once..you very well know how much I want to do it..don't put me starving khushi..at least one time..please khushi..

He removed her pallu and try to unhook her blouse touching her ****..for moment she lost on his touch..but she got back to sense and pushed him on bed and put her pallu back..he asked her with little sad hurt voice..

Arnav: khushi you doing unfair..you never ignored my desire..then what happened to you today..come on khushi don't be rude..

Khushi:(pinch his nose lightly) looking like you forget about your wife personal matters.( he look her confusingly) don't you remember today my special date started..you cannot near me closely next four days..

Arnav feel really silly about himself..how can he forgot about it..khushi smile seeing his face then told him softly..

Khushi: you got your answer na ASR now just shut up and take rest..you need a rest..till you wake up I can do my works..come on..

He lay on bed with pout.she smile and pull her tight cheeks..he make poker face caressing his cheek..then she took seat beside him and start to cares his hair sweetly until he fallen sleep..he slowly start to shut her eyes feeling her soft cares..after he fell to deep sleep.she kissed his forehead and get up from bed..she have to arrange their wardrobe..

When she arranging the closet ,suddenly a album fall from closet..she took that to hand and next moment a beautiful smile appear on her face seeing the album..it's her wedding album..she slowly opened the album..next second there so many memories came front of her eyes..there a photos from engagement to wedding..they captured their all memories together as beautiful album..soon she lost on their past..

after her tragic first meet with arnav on Lucknow her life totally changed..she cannot live there more after arnav released their video of fashion show..then she started her life in Delhi with her jiji,buaji..how much struggle she faced because of him..after coming here also he never let her live peacefully..unexpectedly she got job on his own office because of lavanya..and how much he tortured her with hard tasks even with lavanya..she almost went to die cause of him.thankfully her devimayya give her full strength to bear all his torture and tantrums..how many times he hurt her with his out bursts..but after doing all those his act on Diwali night completely shattered her..first her returned lost payal..after that he almost try to kiss her,then suddenly announced his wedding with lavanya..after doing all this he still hurt her by throwing words when come to drop her..that day he killed her alive..she never be so vulnerable and divested like the way she did that day..he not left single chance to hurt her..after all those hurting memories when she start to live her life refresh again without his presence.then again he come to her life because of daksh entry....daksh her long lost childhood buddy..who moved to abroad in childhood and come back as multi millionaire..he arrived for arnav engagement to raizada mansion as he is good friend cum business client of arnsv..surprisingly she met him when she helping lavanya there..soon both come to know about their past relation and again reunited..truth to be said,she truly enjoyed her moment with him..he indeed helped her to forget bitter memories with arnav and him...surprisingly his friendship changed to love towards her..one day when they went out with raizada family for shopping he confessed his love for her first time front of raizada family..after that he many times confessed his love to her..one day he come to her house bringing marriage  proposal..obviously everyone liked his very much and asked her to accept him..recalling arnav hurting taunts and actions she agreed for his proposal...soon everyone come to know about akash love for payal through daksh..after lot of struggles from Mami finally their marriage also got conformed..soon all three engagements got arranged in raizada mansion grandly...those times she already aware about her feelings for arnav..but she decided to give daksh a chance thinking she and arnav never can be together....but what happened after that she can never forget....


In Gupta house..khushi and payal getting ready on their room for engagements..guptas in cloud nine today..they don't know what to do out of happiness..their both daughters going to get married to such a good men..they both not less then in anyway..after getting dressed fully now all ready to go..both khushi and payal looking totally gorgeous today..guptas eyes moist seeing their both daughters attire..after keeping kajal behind their ears now all come out to go..when they enter to car,suddenly there another car parked front of their gate..they surprised seeing that..then a man wearing black coat suit came out from car and told khushi respected way..

Man: khushi madam daksh sir send a car for bring you to raizada mansion..

Khushi:why this sudden change.daksh never told me about this..

Payal:(little shy tone) khushi maybe daksh want to surprise you..go na..who know maybe he arranged something special for you..

Khushi smile hearing her..but she still unsure..then sudden her phone beeped..it's from daksh..”it's me send the car..don't worry you can trust him"..she got little relief seeing the massage..then after bid bye to family she board to cat and left from there..

Khushi traveling on car looking out lost way..soon after sometime she going to get engaged to daksh,and arnav to lavanya..somewhere this reality giving huge pain on her heart..but this is the truth..she can't think about arnav like this anymore..he never look at her like that..she never can be his choice..his choice always will be high class ultra model girls just like lavanya..who is she..just middle class normal girl..she can never think about him like that..when thinning all this unknowingly lonely tears fall from her eyes..she quickly weep the tears..she should not think all this now..from today other wards her life with daksh...she should not hurt him anyways..it's will be like betrayal to him...thinking all this suddenly her attention fell to the route she going..it's really different and it's look like out skit of Delhi..she confused seeing that..

Khushi: excuse me! Where we going..we need to reach raizada mansion..but we already passed the mansion..where are you taking me?

Man:(professional tone) I'm taking you where sir asked me to bring you madam..don't worry you will reach the place where you belong..

Khushi totally stunned hearing him..she feeling something fishy.but she thought to see what's happening..after few minutes finally car stopped,she quickly get down from car and stunned seeing charming bungalow front of her..she know daksh in very rich man..but why he doing all this now..then the man lead her  inside the house..honestly it's really beautiful house..she now standing in living hall beside that man..she call out for daksh..

Khushi: daksh.....daksh..where are you..please come out...you making me nervous..daksh please..

Instead of voice she hear shoe sounds,she look at staircase and shocked to core seeing the person front of her..her whole body got paralysed..

Arnav coming from upstair wearing new coat suit..there arrogant filled winning smile playing on his face..he slowly come towards her and told that man smirking way keeping eye on her..

Arnav: good job aman..you very brilliantly bring her here..I will give the reward for your effort later..now you may leave..

Aman smile at his boss..soon he left from there taking farewell from his boss..all the time khushi looking arnav with great shock..her mind completely blowed seeing the realisation.arnav looking her with arrogant smile..she asked him shocked wondering way..

Khushi: arnav ji you here..what's all this..you supposed to be there..what are you doing here..where's daksh?

Arnav:(killer smirk)daksh won't come here..he must be at raizada mansion..maybe waiting for you..but so sorry for him because you not going to move from her(almost husky) from Me!!!

Khushi:(totally shocked) arnav ji what are you speaking..have you lost it..today our both engagements with our spouses.lavanya ji and daksh must be waiting for us..come lets go from her..I don't have time for your prank..

Arnav:I'm not creating any prank game khushi..I'm telling the truth..you are not going from here..from me!!

Khushi: (pleading tone) arnav ji please..please don't play like this..what are you thinking of me..I don't know about you..but daksh must be waiting for me..

Arnav:(yell out aggressively) daksh..daksh...daksh..kya tum sirf use barame sochtio..don't you know anything expect that daksh..is he took that much big place on your life that you can't think about anyone expect him..don't you dare to take his name again..

Khushi:(shock angry tone) what happened to you suddenly arnav ji..why are you talking like this..and daksh is my soon to be husband..I'm going to be his..how it's bother you if I take his name..

Arnav:(temper peek to high) it's bother me damn it..it's bothering me very much..I really don't like you taking his name nicely..I don't like you getting close to him.i don't like you getting engaged to him.(close his eyes tired  way)I lose it khushi..I completely lose..I can't try anymore..I try it very much..but I can't digest the fact you getting married to someone..it's truly killing me alive..I only know what kind of pain I suffered those days..I really thought to move on from you getting married to lavanya..but I cannot took away your memories from my mind..your memories just strike on my heart and mind like dynamic..many times I hurt you very much thinking you will go away from my life forever..I got scared sensing you bringing new emotions on my heart which I hate..I scared to express that emotions..but every times when I hurt you I got hundreds times more pain and hurt then you..your every drops of tears make my heart bleed..I can't run away from my feelings anymore..whenever I look you with him,I just feel I like to rip him apart..the every single moment you spend with him burned me alive..my inside beast screamed loudly..you're mine,just mine,,no one have any rights on you expect me..and I won't let anyone take you away from me..you will be mine..mine forever..

Khushi don't know what to speak after arnav ultimate confession..she never ever dreamed one day arnsv singh raizada stand front of her like this..he looking completely new person front her..his emotionless face which only know to angry now showing kind of dangerous obsessive possessiveness..and most shocking this is arnav indeed have strong feeling towards her..her heart dancing in great joy..she don't know how to express her feeling of happiness..the feeling of her first love loving her back its was priceless feeling..but still there something missing..

Khushi:(not understanding way) arnav ji what are you trying to say..why are you talking like this.what's your point..


He looking her with angry filled eyes and being close to her dangerously..khushi getting nervous filled excitement seeing his nearing her..she is on cloud nine hearing his expressive love confession..she thought he will do something intense..but his act surprised her very much..he took out his phone and dialled some number..

Arnav: di I want to marry khushi soon as possible..I don't know what will you do.within three days I want this marriage to happen..otherwise I will go away from this country taking khushi along with me and never come back..make the arrangements..

Flashback end........

That's it..everything went ulta..their both engagement happen on same venue where their previous engagement arranged with their exs..no one expected all this including her..but no doubts both families really happy about their togetherness..but of course everyone feeli bad about daksh and lavanya..somewhere lavanya took that lightly say she already aware about arnav feeling towards khushi and she disclose about her breakup with arnav two days ago..but daksh not took that lightly..he truly hurt by this..he almost fell to depression..but her full understanding ta

K with him..he understands their situation and turn to normal..after that everything happened so quickly..their wedding got fixed in week..that to after big battle with arnav who totally stubborn to take the wedding in three days..after much struggle he agree for it..and there no second talks in ASR works..he arranged all thing simply perfectly..after lot of non-joke finally their wedding happened..but she not let him win over her in bed easily..she took sweet revenge on him by postponing their consummate for a week..it's truly worth to see his face when she announced that decision of hers..he totally turn everything down..but she didn't back up from her decision.then all whole one week they both talked about all their feelings towards each other..soon one week finished..then arnav start to show his fifty shades of ASR side to her..she never dreamed he was that much romantic,and danger person on life..he truly romantic King..(smile) now it's been six months they both got married..and life being complete paradise for thrm..no worries.just happiness..she always praying to devimayya to keep their life this always.

But bitterness and pain also part of life right..even without that life can be bore..who know there something beyond pain and worry waiting for them..might be already started...lets see...


Next updates depends on this updates votes and comments..and I really mean it..

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Oct 15

Raaz........ (By Fathimasumaiya19) (Thanked: 40 times)

Everyone talking in living hall after having yummy dinner made by both raizada bahus..suddenly daksh make a entry surprising everyone..he come with joyful face and asked all cheerfully..

Daksh: hello beautiful people!! 

Nani:(surprised tone) daksh beta you come? Why don't you inform us about your arrival?

Daksh:(smile) it's called surprise Nani sweetheart..my deal got finalised soon..so I arrived before the time..

All smile  hearing him..then he took seat beside Mami and asked khushi cheerfully looking arnav..

Daksh: how are you my butterfly..do you miss your sweet heart?

Arnav look at him with killing eyes.everyone  controlled their giggles seeing he again start to irritate arnav..he always love to bring out arnav beast side..khushi move towards daksh and hit his head playfully..

Khushi: you won't stop troubling my husband na..why you always irritating him..

Daksh: oh madam.I'm not troubling him okay..I'm just talking with my childhood sweetheart..what his problem if I talk with you.i know you years ago before him..so I have more rights on you..

Arnav throwing deadly glare arrow towards him..even knowing he saying all this to irritate him.he can't bear his words..rest if members chuckles knowingly seeing the same Ramayana..this is happening past six months..from the moment he come out from depression ,he didn't left a chance to irritate arnav..he do it prank way..he don't have any intention to create any problem between arshi..he just play around him taking rights of khushi playfully..he used to come from London often.he got so close with raizadas,,now he also member of their family..whenever he come he won't go without making arnav hell angry..now family members used to his tease..then khushi pinch his cheek and asked him..

Khushi: did you had dinner daksh?

Daksh:(dreamy way) no sweety..I just fly here to have your delicious handmade meals..I'm very hungry..

Saying that he wink at her..then khushi take him to dinning table and served him.lhe left with her showing tongue to arnav..he threw a pillow on him angrily..all controlled their laugh really hardly seeing arnav angry bird face..their night end with masti giggles and jokes..

After few days..today raizada ladies come for shopping..today like some girls day out..after send off their husbands to their offices.all now having gala time in mall..first they three anjali,khushi,payal come to men section to purchase cloths for their husbands..Mami having full spa time on salon..they selected so many dresses for their spouses..khushi taking much time to choose perfect cloths for her dashing hubby..she purchased so many new brand suits and casual wears for arnav..after finishing their men shopping all enter to ladies sections..khushi selected most of sarees for her as arnav really love to see her in saree..she specially select red sarees..payal,anjali helped her in choosing other dresses..when she busy on her shopping ,suddenly he phone ring..khushi smile seeing her hubby call..she soon attend..

Khushi: hello arnav ji..

Arnav: hey khushi where are you?

Khushi: I come to shopping with our ladies arnav ji..

Arnav: oh shopping day..so what you purchased?

Khushi: still I not did my shopping fully..I'm looking for sarees..still there many more to buy..

Hearing her reply so arnav's naughty mind wake up and run like express train..he asked her naughty way..

Arnav: oh so you mean still you not did your private shopping!

Khushi:(confused tone) what is private shopping means? I don't get it.

Arnav:(smirk naughtily) private shopping means your Victoria secret shopping..

First she clueless about his talk..then soon she got it what he is saying..her cheeks turn red hearing his words..she know the talk not going right way..

Arnav: (more naughty) khushi I have some suggestions to tell on your secret shopping..you see more then you its me seeing your inner wears more..(grumpy face) and I don't like the inner wears you wearing..those all really long and have stoned designs..and it's little difficult to remove urgently..choose some wears which don't have stoned designs and easy to remove..

Khushi breathing hyper hearing his talks..he so casually telling all this like its very normal talks..her both cheeks burning highly out of shy..she don't know how to reply him..then he continue,

Arnav: and khushi the bras which can open from front..and don't choose stoned bras..you know I gets hurt when I enjoy your ****..choose something soft and unharmed,specially your panties..you know last time my little friend got hurt because of your stoned design panty..so don't buy such a wears..

Khushi:( heavily blushing) arnav ji enough..please stop it..don't talk such shameless things..

Arnav:(smirk sending her state) what there to say shameless wifey.I'm just telling my side..it's a simple suggestions from my side..and it's your duty to fulfil your husbands wishes..I don't want you wear any stoned or other kind of designed inner wears and that's final..if you till buy it.i think you don't want to tear all of your inner wears..

Khushi look around to see is anyone looking her or hearing their talks..thank god there no one around her..she don't know how he talking all those so easily..then his next reply just ripped her skin and make her whole body red..

Arnav:(romantic tone) and baby..your special days finished last night..you don't know how much desperately my little friend waiting to get inside you..tonight going to be very long and wild baby..and be ready to wear the nighty I present you two days ago..

Saying the he cut the call..she still stand statue hearing his words..her whole body shivering thinking about tonight..it's not that it's her her first time..they already make love Many times..but her heart always knows whenever arnav talks more romantic and wild intensely,she know that night not going to be normal night..he will definitely show on of his shade tonight..thinking all this she finished her shopping and purchased her Victoria secret section as per her hubby wish..

After wishing everyone goodnight arshi come to their room..soon after enter arnav closed the door with a bang and took khushi to wild kiss..he kissing her with so much passionate..soon recover from shock she kissed him back with same wild and passionate..after controlling his argue to took her.he broke the kiss and to,d her in raspy voice..

Arnav: go jaanu ..come wearing that nighty..I'm waiting..

She shivering hearing his voice..she try to make faces to change his mind..but tonight he so determined to see her on nightie..she give up knowing he not going to hear..she left to washroom taking box from closet..he changed to night dress sand sit on bed waiting for her..soon he hear the door open sound..he turn to and next second completely lost on the ****y view front of him..

Khushi standing front of him wearing black short nighty..it's too short..it's just till her waist..she trying her level best to pull it down..but it's just struck on her waist..she can see highly burning desire on her husband eyes..she don't have courage to look at his intense eyes..she start to breath highly sensing he coming close to her..she can't handle to atmosphere of intimacy..his breath touching her face..he touch her forehead with his..and to,d her in raspy romantic voice..

Arnav: I don't know what to say khushi! Right now I'm feeling like most luckiest man on earth seeing your gorgeous view,..I'm very lucky khushi,to get most gorgeous girl on earth us my love..you killing me with your beauty khushi..

Her face turn fully red hearing his romantic compliment..he always praise her..but today his praising bringing some kind of satisfaction and proud on her..soon he took her to his strong arms and place her on bed like some precious flower..indeed she is his expensive flower..soon they both fell on the world where no one present expect them..the room filled with their passion,love filled moans....


after some days,..AR.company..arnav working on his cabin..suddenly aman make a entry there..he have broad smile on his face..seeing the smile arnsv knows there some good news waiting for him..he asked him in boss tone..(typical ASR)

Arnav: what's the matter aman? Is there any good news?

Aman:(smile broadly) it's greatest news sir..you will get happy likes me after hearing that news..

Arnav: without raising the curiosity tell me what's the news..

Aman:sir the property you wished to buy month ago,finally we got it..that property owner agreed to sell that property to us..

Like aman said arnav smile happily hearing the news..he totally top of the world hearing the news..

Arnav: it's a great news aman..you truly say the greatest news..finally we got the property..how many days I waited for this..well done aman..

Aman accept his boss compliment gladly..it's rarely he get such a compliments...then arnav asked him.

Arnav: then what's next..did you finalised the deal..have you start the work?

Aman: yes sir as per your order the work already started..it's will take a week to complete total work..the property owner coming to meet you today..we can finalised the deal today..here the documents..

Arnav took the file from him broadly and look at it with winning smile..finally he got his win..he is full form to own this property..now he got it..if it's for his own need,long ago he might give up on take over this property..but this is for his only love..and he will do anything for his love..he plan about what to do after week with aman..

At evening..after day off from office arnav akash come to home..all geathering in hall.both join to family members seeing everyone in big discussion..akash asked them.

Akash: hi guys..what are you all discussing?

Anjali:( smile excitingly) woo kya haina akash.our nk bhai getting engage next week in Sydney..he invited our whole family to attend his engagement..

Mami:(more excited) ha ha Sydney...hello hai bye bye..we all going to fly..and he calling everyone two days before the engagement..so we all plan to go after three days..

Both brothers surprised hearing the news..specially arnav..he lost the rare smile which played on his face from noon..he totally unpleased by the news..

Anjali: so everyone going to Sydney after three days..kitna accha lagega na..sab saath mai abroad jarye..there many things to buy.i thought to go shopping tomorrow..

Arnav:arr di I cannot come with you all.

Everyone surprised hearing him..all faces fallen down hearing his reply..he told them little apology way.

Arnav: di I have some important works to do this whole month..my presence totally needs here..I cannot come with you all..

Anjali:(grumpy) kya hai chote..isn't it more important then your brother engagement..he invited everyone with lot of love and expectation..he will get really sad if you don't come..

Khushi:(same tone) ha arnav ji..you know about nanheji na..he adore you very much..he will surely get upset if you don't come..

Arnav: but what can I do.its really important now..I might be delay this if I know about nk engagement early..I can't do anything now...akash tell them the situation..

Akash: yes guys..bhai is right..it's really important work..bhai presence really necessary here..it's million worth work..

Everyone made sulky face hearing they both..arnav don't like to see them like this..but it's really important..then anjali told him..

Anjali; if you not coming that's fine..we all going after three days..you have to be on home alone..even khushi ji too coming..haina khushi ji?

She asked khushi..she don't know to say yes or no..she really want to go.but she can't go leaving arnav all alone here..nobody here to look after him..nowadays he can't do anything without her..arnav make a irritating face hearing his di.he doing all this for khushi.then how she can go,.like Nani heard their inner self told anjali normally..

Nani: anjali bitiya..if khushi too come who going to look after your brother..(look arnav) you know about his neglect towards food and medicine na..if we all go.he will totally forget everything cause of his work..khushi's presence need here bitiya..

Anjali make agree face hearing Nani..she know Nani s correct..she well know about her brother careless..

Anjali: you're right Nani..how I forget about it.khushi ji's presence need here..(to khushi) khushi are you okay about not coming with us..I know you really want to come..

Khushi:(smile) it's okay di..I don't mind..like you say I can't come leaving arnav ji behind knowing his careless on himself..he won't take care of himself alone..I will stay with him..make nanheji understand the situation..I hope he will understand the problem..

Anjali nodded at her smiling way..arnav sigh in big relief seeing everyone agreed..he look at khushi with smile..he touched by her care..soon all again start to discuss..arnav left to their room to fresh up.khushi left to make a coffee for him..

After coming to room.he took out his phone and called his manager aman...


Aman: yes sir everything already set..Monday evening you will reach kullu manali as per our plan..

Arnav cut the call with smile and thinking about the surprise he planned to give his lady love..he really excited to give her the surprise soon..he counting the days..then he went to fresh up without knowing their tale next chapter is something unusual adventure...lets see..


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Raaz ........ (By Fathimasumaiya19) (Thanked: 42 times)

Two days later...

Today whole raizada family fly off to Sydney..arnav khushi coming back to home after send up their family..it's really emotional farewell..their family really don't like to go without arshi..after lot of hugs and kisses finally all fly off..right now khushi little sad about their separation..arnav pissed off seeing her sad face..why she she being like this..didn't she like to be alone with him..he really looking forward to spend time alone with her..it's not that he happy about his family farewell..it's just he want to live somedays alone with khushi without any disturbance or interruption..he already planned to make her time with him unforgettable..soon they reached to raizada mansion.both enter to silence filled house..without her knowledge he already give off to prakash brothers..now they alone in raizada mansion..

Both enter to their room.soon arnav hugged her from behind and start to kiss nuzzles her neck..she starlet by his unexpected attack and try to move away blushing way..

Khushi: arnavji..leave me.li need to change my dress..

Arnav:(nuzzling her deep neck) why you need to do that..main hoon na..I will remove it..(unpin her pallu)

Khushi:(red face) don't be naughty arnavji..leave me..I need to take a shower..

Arnav:( bite her earlobe) don't take a shower now..then you have to take twice..

She highly blushing hearing his reply..she know what he means..he fully remove her saree..he took her to arms and placed her on bed..soon she give herself on his passion..he start to kiss her neck with full of desire and passionate..when she try to say something he shut her mouth with romance filled kiss..both kissing each other ,depth of true love and desire..after moment he broke the kiss and start to kiss her neck sweet spot..he told her kissing way..

Arnav: you don't know how many days I waited for this day..being alone with you in house without any interrupts or disturbance..I'm totally happy today..

Khushi: (stopped him from kissing her) what!! You happy about our family going away from us..don't you feel sad..you're really bad arnavji..

Arnav:(cares her waist line) I don't mean that..of course I feel bad about they left..its just I want to be with you..I want your all attention only on me..I don't like it when you run away from my arms when someone calls you..most of the time you ignores me and my needs when our family around..I really don't like it..now here just you and me..your whole time and attention going to on me..

She smile hearing him..he saying true,.they won't get much time to each other all time..they just get time at night in room..and this is first time they being alone after wedding..they even didn't went to honeymoon after marraige.its because of his damn work..then again he start to kiss her neck..

Arnav:(moaning tone) now I can have you anytime I want..day or night..no excuses or interrupts..and I can be inside you whole day if I want!!

Khushi:(hit him lightly,scold in shy tone) badmash!! Kese baat kar rahi hai aap?

Arnav: (naughty tone) kya hai? I'm telling what going to happen..I really want to be inside you so much..all deep and hard!!

Her cheeks burning in highly blushing hearing shameless talks from him..soon he come top of her fully and took her to love fantasy world..next moments their room filled with moans and screams of theirs out of heating bed fight...


Khushi working on kitchen having smile on her face..these few days alone with her naughty dirty hubby totally wonderful..she discovered so many shades of her angry hubby..she never ever dreamed the great arnav singh raizada have such kind of shades inside him..it's totally surprising..these few days he not leave single seconds to be more romantic with her..it's just they both present in home..he give whole one month work-off Prakash brothers..she don't know why..he even against about she working in kitchen as he planned to order meals from out..but she totally against about giving unhealthy food to her hubby..and it's very difficult to work peacefully when he around her..he always try to find a way to do naughty staffs with her..she cannot deny she completely love her this life with him..all alone in home..he making every moments memorable...but cause if it.she can't forget her family..they used to talk with her and arnav daily..and nk make them agree to arrive there at his marriage weeks ago..now she is on kitchen making their lunch after strictly asking her hubby to be on room until she make lunch..like grumpy baby he watching movie on room obeying her order..it's all most over..she making his favourite items.she quick her work knowing he waiting for her hungrily..(for food)...

Arnav watching some random English movie in room..he keep looking towards doorstep with pouty face..he eagerly waiting for her to come..for both food and her..suddenly his phone ring..he got irritate seeing call from office..these days he bunked his office daily..he just return home after doing much importance works which only need his presence..rest if it he put on aman head..he don't want to be on office leaving his beautiful wife all alone in room..he attended the call with irritation and talk few montes..after sometime he cut the call sending his wife coming towards him..he turn and saw she coming inside carrying food tray on hand..he gulp seeing her looking so ****y and hot on her black transparent saree..he always got hard whenever he see her on sarees..she arranged the food on table and took seat beside him..she sense he looking her with eating eyes..she try to be normal..it's so hard to escape from his heating stares..when she try to serve him he stopped her.she look at him confused way.he smile and open his mouth signalling her to feed him..she smile at him and slowly start to feed him..he hugged her side way and continually eating feeding by her..she too had feeding him way..their eating time silently went without any talks..but both hear soft rabba ve instrumental playing for them..which only they can hear and belong....

At night...

After cleaning the kitchen khushi come to their room..she surprised seeing arnav placing their cloths in bags..it's seems like he packing..she rushed towards him..

Khushi: arnavji what are you doing? Why you packing all cloths?

Arnav: (hidden smile) I'm packing all those cause tomorrow we are going somewhere..

She surprised hearing his reply.all of sudden he telling something like this..

Khushi: but where we going? Why don't you tell me before?

Arnav:(casually) it's come suddenly khushi,not preplanned ..you know right there important project work going in company..regrading that now I need to go out of station.i cannot leave you alone here..so we both going..tomorrow early morning we are going..be ready..

He told that all go continually packing..she totally can't understand his sudden plan.sometime he really weird..without asking more she help him on packing..she even didn't ask him where they going..she not interested to ask as it's going to be professional trip..but she excited about going out with him..it's going to be their first meet after wedding..but sadly it's official trip..after fully packing their staffs..both lay on bed..he took her to arms and closed his eyes after giving her goodnight kiss..she fall on sleep hugging him..after sometime making sure she fully sleep.he open eyes smiling way..he kissed her nose..it's good she don't ask anything more about their trip,otherwise he might be spill his surprise..he eagerly waiting for tomorrow to come and present his darling wife his big surprise..hugging her tightly he fell to sleep dreaming about her reaction on his surprise....

Next day early morning..both reached to airport..after doing security checks both board to flight..obviously it's business class..first she afraid about traveling in flight first time..but after her husband lovely comfort zone she feel much relaxed and calm..soon flight took off..and khushi too fallen sleep cause if early raise..arnav let her sleep thinking it's good for him..

Khushi open her eyes hearing arnav's call..he to,d her they reached..then both exist from flight and check out airport..after came out khushi totally surprised seeing fully different place from Delhi,.then he board her on car and start to drive..she even surprised seeing he driving the car..she look the view amused way..from last night she getting do many surprises..she totally don't have any idea where they now..without able to control her curiosity she asked him..

Khushi: arnavji where are we? Why this place looking different? 

Arnav: (smile) you will come to know soon khushi..have patience!!

She pout hearing his reply.both continue to travel..when they going further..suddenly khushi start to feel damn cold..she shivering out of cold..he asked her to wear the sweater in bag..she immediately wear it..now they going ice mountain covered road..even snows start to fall..she clueless about where's she..she impatiently waiting to know the place..

After full 40 minutes drive arnav finally stopped the car..he came out and open the door for khushi..she wake up from her minutes nap and came out from car..indeed it's cold place..

Khushi:(impatience tone) arnav it's enough ..please atleast tell me now where are we..I can't wait anymore..please tell me..

He place finger on her lips.he smile looking her eager face..he slowly close her eyes and bring her front of him..then he move away hands and told her huskily..


She open her both mouth and eyes widely seeing the view from of her..her body stopped shivering out of shock..she cant believe her eyes..first time in her life she seeing a kingdom like palace front of her..no no..not look alike..it's indeed a kingdom..she totally fallen love on the palace beauty and grandness..she getting some weird vibration..new found of emotions bursting out of her cells..she asked arnav without taking eyes from the palace..

Khushi: arnavji who's palace this ?

Arnav:(smirk) pleasure all mine to announce,,khushi arnav singh raizada owner of this grand palace!!!

Now it's real shocking moment for khushi hearing arnav statment..she looking him with wide open mouth..her reaction worth to see...what the!! Now only this line came to her mind..what the hell he just said..she beyond speechless..knowing her state he hugged her from behind and told her softly..

Arnav: I always told you na..you are queen of my life..I thought to make it real..now you not just queen of my life..you truly a queen to this palace..it's belong to you..you're the owner my queen!!

Khushi totally lost her voice hearing him..she never ever dreamed he will do something like this to her..she looking the palace with many emotions,.he slowly came front of her..her voice chocked completely..she don't know what to say..he cupped her face and waiting for her to say something..after gathering her voice little.she to,d him chocked way..

Khushi: arnavji..yeh...aap..yeh..you know..it's not necessary..I never thought you will do something (gulp) like this..I never expected all this arnavji..I never want all this..

Arnav:(soft voice) I know my love..you won't expect all those..for you me and my love enough for you..but jaanu I want to do all those for you..in fact more then this..khushi I don't know how to say this..you're mean everything to me..there nothing big thing on my life more then you,,even now my di Aldo came after you..you mean the world to me khushi..and I want to give all happiness you deserve..I always want to keep you as queen..just mine..not just in word..real way..it's my biggest wish khushi..please don't deny..

Next second khushi took him to bone crash hug..she totally overwhelmed by arnav confession..joyful tears falling on her eyes seeing her husband unconditional love on her..he hugged her back same way..she doesn't care about the coldness..she totally out of the world after his confession..he broke the hug and wipe tears from her eyes..

Arnav: now crying season finish..happy season come..it's time to enter inside your palace..come my queen!!

He took her hand on his..slowly move towards palace door..it really long and huge..both placed hand on door and slowly pushed to open..it open with loud cracking sound..both slowly place leg inside the palace..they completely not notice the dark clouds surrenders around the place..they fully inside the palace..she totally mesmerised by the palace beauty..it truly gorgeous and breathtaking..every corner of it screaming it beauty and pride..she gasps out mesmerisingly..

Khushi: arnavji this is totally gorgeous!! I can't believe my eyes..this is something beyond gorgeous!!

Arnav: I know you will like it..you're right it's beautiful!! No one will believe this is 80 years old palace..

Khushi:( surprised tone) what !! 80 years..are you kidding me? It's looking completely new!

Arnav: yeah..and that's the magic of this palace..timeless beauty!!

Khushi:(admiring every corner of palace) who lived here before you purchased this arnavji?

Arnav:( smile) luckily no one lived or purchased this last 80 years..I heard this is some royal family palace 80 years ago..some rajput or something..after them no one lived here..( hug her from behind) now this is your palace Mrs.raizada!!

Khushi: if there no one lived here,how you purchased this? Where's the owner come from?

Arnav: actually he is not lawfully the owner..he is some builder..he take over most of properties here..and I got fully details about this palace..it's clearly show that there no one owner of this palace..so I buy this palace lawfully from him..now it just yours...that's it..

When she try to ask something.he stopped her and took her to show around the palace..both come to living hall..it's very huge like ball room..all architectures perfectly awesome..she totally mesmerised by palace beauty..both step on staircase and went upstairs ..

Upstair was totally beautiful..all designs made by royal code..it's fully had a Royal touch..somewhere it's even had a gothic touch..then both enter to first floor,first room..it's so beautiful..its have a look of 20 or 30 century..but there little make over of nowadays designs..they can imagine how might that royal family must live 80 years ago..

Arnav: this is first room of first floor..I arranged this as guest room..you can make any changes if you want khushi..

She nodded at him..she don't need to change anything as its already perfect..like that both take a look of next two floors and rooms..everything was extremely gorgeous..lastly they come to fourth floor..he took her to one of biggest room  from rest of rooms..he told her with his famous smirk.

Arnav: finally this is our bedroom..master bedroom of this palace? How is it ?

Khushi: it's extremely beautiful arnavji!! Must say that rajput family indeed had a excellent choice of designs..

He agree with her..then she took completely look of the room..inside she already feeling like some queen of this palace..there something pulling her more inside the room..he let her explore the room fully..she come to bathroom..must say its not less then the room..so elegant and exclusive..then she come to the now ago favourite spot of the room..balcony...it's very chirping..they can view whole kullu manali beauty standing there,,she admire the view with million dollar smile and arnav come and hugged her from behind..she give herself to the hug and told him smilingly..

Khushi: thank you arnavji..thank you so much..I know you loved me..but I never thought you will do such a big things to me..I don't know how to reciprocate my love to you..

Arnav:( kissed her chin) you don't need to do any big things to me khushi..your presence in my life enough to keep me happy life long..I wished to make you queen of a palace instead to mansion..now this is our small world..just you and me away from all!!

She hugged him tightly overwhelming by all happy things happening around them..both of them hugging each other on balcony..its blissful moment..then she asked him smiling way..

Khushi: so you lied me about attending business trip,.there no business meet have?

Arnav: yeah I to,d you like that to surprise you..but it's not fully lie..I indeed going to build a vacation resort in manali..it's new project,,we going to stay here until its get finished..

Khushi:(shock tone) how can we stay here till that..we need to go back arnavji..what about our family?

Arnav: it's won't take too long khushi..minimum two months..don't worry we can inform about this to family..I'm sure they will get happy hearing this..

She smile hearing him..he smile back..more then she he happy about she loved his first gift to her..he indeed happy seeing her reaction on his surprise gift..then his phone start to ring ..he went away to attend the call..she smile at his retreat figure and look out again admire the view..all of sudden an cold breeze hit her body harshly..she shiver feeling the high cold..kullu manali indeed cold place..suddenly she feel someone presence behind her.,she turn knowing its Arnav..but her smile vanished seeing there no one behind her..but she felt a presence of someone..she brush off thinking its might be feel like that cause of cold..she again look out waiting for arnav....

Behind her back an shadow sitting on bed looking her direction.finally the right person come to the right place..its RAAZ time!!!


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Raaz..next episode (By Fathimasumaiya19) (Thanked: 35 times)

At night..after exploring whole palace all day khushi first time boiled milk on kitchen,and served to arnav..they already start to love their new time..he informed her about appointed two maids will come tomorrow..he just arranged two maids as he needs their own space..now after having light dinner on hall both comes to their new bedroom..khushi went to change into nighty..after sometime both changed to night dress and joined to bed..it's extremely cold night..they didn't ON AC as already cold air coming from out..actually it's romantic atmosphere..both get into warm blanket..when khushi get ready to sleep hugging him..he suddenly come top of her..as usual she starlet by his act and look at him knowing way..

Arnav(intense voice) romantic place,romantic moment,romantic husband...don't you think we should change this atmosphere to more romantic..first **** in new house!!

She try to control the raising red shade on her face..he softly caressed his beard cheek with her softly cheek..she shirked feeling him doing that after long time..he covered both of them fully by blanket and got lost on love fantasy world of their.....

Late midnight...minimum 3'O clock..both arnav khushi sleeping peacefully after having heating love making two hours ago..now both sleeping facing the ceiling ..she keeping head on his arm..both on deep sleep..suddenly the bed start to shake little..like a clash an black smoke came out from under the bed..and it start to climb on khushi..she suddenly felt huge weight on her chest and start to choke..it's sitting on her chest and pressure her chest..she got breathless..her legs ,hands are numb..she cannot make a move..she try to wake arnav but her whole body paralysed..just her mind working..suddenly her eyes got opened..she stops breathing out of frightened seeing an black shadow sitting on her chest.....

Khushi get up from her sleep breathing hardly..she shivering violently..arnav's sleep got disturbed cause of her sudden up..he cupped her frighten face..she spoke out gasping tone..

Khushi: arnavji...arnavji...someone pressured...pressured my chest..it climb on me..I saw...I saw that arnavji..

Arnav: khushi jaanu relax!! relax jaanu...first calm down..baby there nothing happened to you..see you're fine..it's just a dream khushi..nothing more..please calm down...

Khushi:( hyper tone) nehi nehi arnavji..it's not any dream..it's really happened..someone climb on me and pressured my chest..I feel that truly..believe me arnavji..I'm telling true..

Arnav:(calming tone) okay okay...it's true okay...baby I think you got a sleep paralysis..those all happens when someone experience sleep paralysis..it's normal thing baby..but I know it's frightening state..it's just your brain prank khushi..don't worry whatever happens it's just a hallucination..come one calm down..

He took her to comfort huge..she hugged him tightly..he caressed her hair saying soothing words..then her heartbeat come back to normal state..he covered her naked body properly and took her to arms  secured way..he murmur sweet things until she sleep,,after moment both got back to sleep..but khushi open eyes..she think about the experience deeply..is she really faced any hallucinations? there huge possible for that..but how can it's possible as she faced that truly..she even opened her eyes..and that scenes..her body again start to shiver recalling that..she shut her eyes again and hugged him tightly to get some sleep forgetting that horrible hallucinations or dream...there under the bed that black smoke came out and looking her sleeping figure..it get inside bedroom mirror...

Next day morning...finally khushi completely forget about last night incident and cheerfully started her first morning on their house..morning view of their palace worth to see..it's beautiful with touch of nature cold and breeze..she wear peach colour net sari and made a frozen braid..arnav still sleeping..she come to kitchen and start to make simple breakfast and decided to take that to bedroom..when she making breakfast suddenly she hear a sound from hall..it's like someone entering to house..she felt scared all of sudden..she slowly took baby step towards hall and look around..but there no one..suddenly someone patted her from behind..she yelled out of frighten and closed her face..after moment she slowly took her palm hearing a lady voice..she surprised seeing an middle aged lady looking her with apologies face..she asked her gasping way..

Khushi: who are you? What are you doing here?

Women:(apologies way) my name is jamini madam..I'm sorry for scaring you..I don't mean to do it..I come here to do household works..this palace owner appointed me as maid.

Khushi:( huge relief tone) jamini ji you just scared me..(smile) anyways it's okay..I'm khushi raizada .my husband appointed you as maid here..

Then jamini greet her properly..she is nice lady on late thirties..soon khushi took her to kitchen and get help from her to arranged the breakfast..after sometime she make breakfast and nicely arranged on food tray..after telling jamini to have food she took the tray to their room..

She enter to room and saw her hubby still sleeping covering himself till waist..he sleeping with open mouth..she chuckles seeing his baby pose in sleep..she slowly kelp the tray on table and sit beside her hubby..she start to shook him..

Khushi: arnavji get up..it's already morning..it's time to up..come on get..see I brought our breakfast to room..come on get up..

He didn't make a move on his pose.she even try to tickle him but before she do that he hold her hand and pinned her on bed..she gasp at his act and told him scolding way..

Khushi: arnavji you always do this..why you always scaring me? You're so bad arnavji..

Arnav: it's my style baby..and I'm more glad to be naughty bad husband for my ****y wife..don't you like it?

She smile hearing him.he kissed her forehead and wished her good morning sweetly..then she make him sit on bed..she turn shyly seeing he still naked..he smirk seeing her shy face and wear a short quickly..then she place the tray on bed..he surprised seeing delicious foreign style breakfast front of him..

Arnav: khushi what a pleasant surprise..I don't know you made this style breakfast today..

Khushi: who kya haina..everyday I'm serving you same way na..so I thought to give you the breakfast differently today..foreign style..how id it ?

Arnav: it's superb..actually I love it..I always want to have such a romantic breakfast with you..love you sweetheart..thank you..

He kissed her cheek soundly..she smile satisfied way seeing he loved her effort.then he went to washroom have quick fresh up..after wearing t shirt with sweat pants she join to bed again..then both start to have their small bedroom breakfast..actually it's quite romantic..midway she informed about jamini arrival to him..he called the agent and got conformed that she is true maid..both had the breakfast with little lovely dovely talks and touches..after hour both had the breakfast and he went to fresh up..khushi left to hall again...

Both arnav khushi spending time looking the outside view from hall..jamini making lunch for them..both of them talking about random things..some time ago both called their family and informed about their staying here..as they expected everyone totally shocked by that news and for half hours they asked every single things about the palace..after telling all details to them just sometime ago they cut the call..both sitting on sofa and he hugging her from behind..

Arnav: baby do you want to go out? You see the climate is really nice to go out!

Khushi: I would love to go..but not today .let's   go tomorrow..you know I still not settled everything here..and there many more places we need to see here..last night we didn't explore the whole palace..after seeing remaining areas lets got tomorrow..

Arnav: as you say my queen..

She smile hearing him..then both continued talk..after sometime jamini called them for lunch..their lunch affair went normally..everything going normally...

Both arshi sitting on sofa after having lunch..when talking each other suddenly arnav's phone ring..he answered..hearing his talking tone khushi know he talking about some work and he not ready to do that now..after two minutes talk he cut the call and look at khushi apology cum angry way..

Arnav: khushi I'm really sorry sweetheart..I need to go out now..the engineers are come to design the resort plan..my presence need there..if I don't know I need to wait another month to appoint them again..I really need to go..I'm sorry baby..

Khushi: (smiles) it's okay arnavji..I'm totally fine about it..I know you won't go if your presence not important..you go I'm fine..

Arnav: thank you jaan..thank you for understanding..it's just two hours work.i will be front of you after two hours..it's just for today..

He telling everything things to pacify here even after she is totally fine..after few minutes pacifying he left the place bid bye to her after promising he will be back in two hours..she smile thinking about her overprotective lovely husband..she not feeling bored as there many more things to see here..after telling jamini she went to more inside the palace..

She is now on first floor..last night they just viewed the rooms.apart from that there more things like paintings and antique items..she just love the Royal touch of every items..she walking on floor admiring the painting on wall..it's truly magical and eye catching..slowly she step on second floor..even it's very beautiful..like that she come to third floor..when like other floors she keenly admire and observe the paintings and items..when she crossing one of room on floor..suddenly gust of wind touched her face...she shirked feeling the sudden breeze..its unannounced..her body feel weird vibrant..unknowingly to herself her eyes slowly turn to second room of the floor..her mind telling her like that room calling her inside..and it's indeed looking invited..without able to control her,,her legs move towards that wide door and observed that more keenly..right now she not on her control..her sixth sense saying this room trying to connect with her mind..controlling her mind she slowly pushed the door of room..she saw its looking same way arnav showed her last night..one of beautiful room of palace after their bedroom..when she thought to not enter inside the room some force pushed her inside..she now standing inside the room with clueless face..she feeling really strange..and right now there no perfect words present to describe her unstable heart..she not standing middle of the room..she observe the room sharply..she noticed something new which she didn't noticed last night..this room have a touch of girl's room..it's have a touch of feminine..she slowly move towards bed and cares the headboard ever slowly..it's something strange happening inside her..her mind not one right state..it running behind something wild fast..at clueless state she slowly move towards the closet..she open that and saw there nothing inside..but she sense huge honey fragrance poked her nose when she open that closet..unknowingly she inhale that deeply..it's feel good..but she jerk immediate hearing a door cracking sound from behind..she turn and shocked seeing another door after closet..and it's not looking like closet door..it's looking like another doorstep..without her notice her eyes blink seeing that door..without think a second she took step towards the doors..she placed hand on door...


khushi come back to her mental state and stepped back hearing that whisper on her ears...she look around scared way and quickly rushed out of room..but she suddenly feel a pull from behind..something holding her pallu..her heart beating like drums cause she strongly feeling someone from behind pulling her pallu..she slowly turn with small courage and sighs in huge relief seeing her pallu  struck in bed..she quickly remove her pallu and come out of room quickly..don't know why she not feeling like to move away from there..her eyes again turn to look at that door...it's not just a door..she feeling like there some more inside..blocking her unwanted thoughts she closed the door and move away from there..but she didn't notice a shadow hand caressing the closet she touched..it whispered deadly.



At night...arnav khushi watching movie in their room..both engrossed in movie well..its a romantic movie...suddenly there a intimate scene start to play...she blushed seeing hero licking heroine thighs..she try to avoid looking the scene..arnav understood her sudden change..he smirk seeing her red face seeing that scene..he cuddles her tightly and asked her naughty tone..

Arnav: why you getting shy baby..you reacting like you never experienced that moment..don't you remember how I licked chocolate ice cream from your thighs..you even took me to your lower part and asked me to lick your flower..

Khushi: hey devimayya!! Arnavji you are really dirty person..

She pushed him away out of heavily shy state hearing his bold dirty words..he is really dirty nowadays..it's so hard to control his dirty mouth..he chuckles seeing her red face..he took her to cuddle again and told her ****ily.

Arnav: why you feeling shy baby..it's very normal thing on husband and wife relation..there many more dirty words then this..you will cum on spot if you hear my real dirty mouth..wanna hear?

She hide her face on his chest feeling extremely shy..he smiling seeing his innocent wife shy state..she is still newbie to all those things...but he won't let her be baby always..even she have to get dirty on him..he really want to see bold and dirty khushi on their bedroom life..then he thought to not tease her more and again start to watch the movie..she got relief seeing he stopped him naughtiness..then both again engrossed in movie...when movie getting to interesting point suddenly power cut..arnav groan at irritating disturbance...but khushi got little scared seeing the darkness..the room totally dark now they can't seen anything..she grip arnav's arms tightly ..knowing her scared of darkness he tightly cuddle her and try to calm her..she hugging him closing the eyes..suddenly she feel little movement on bed but she didn't care about anything ..just cuddle her hubby tightly..he caressing her hair and murmuring sweet things on her ears..she feel huge relief being on his arms..suddenly she hear arnav's voice..

”khushi I got the candle..here I'm coming"

She opened her eyes with jerk hearing arnav's voice out of the room..wait what? Out of room..how can she hear his voice from out when he is with her now...her body start to shiver .if arnav's out of the room means who's here with her now..suddenly cares on her hair get instance..her body got heat of fire..then there a whisper on her ear dangerously..


She screamed loudly..but her voice not came out..she try to move away from it hold..but her whole body paralysed..she try to call arnav but she totally dumb..she closing her eyes tightly and wishing  to vanish whatever happening to her right now..immediately she feel arnav shook her..without opening eyes she hugged him tightly..her whole body shivering badly..

Arnav: khushi jaan what happened to you..are you okay ? What happened khushi?

Khushi: why did you leave me alone arnavji..you know na how much I scared of darkness..why you left me here alone?

Arnav:( surprised tone) khushi what are you saying..you herself told me you're okay and asked me to bring the candle!! now you're saying different thing..what happen to you?

She opened her eyes and look at him shocked way..he looking her with surprised cum confused face..when she said something like that..being alone in darkness beyond thought to her..he looking her with mixed reaction..what happen to her..just sometime ago she told him she is okay and asked him to bring the candle alone..but here she terribly scared..he smile at her...sometime his wife truly impossible...

Arnav: sometime you're really impossible khushi..now I know why you say something like that..you try to be brave front of me right..you try to be on darkness bravely..(smile) but as usual your got scared...it's okay sweetheart..let's forget about this..see power come again..you need a sleep come on..

She try to say something..but he shut her mouth and make her lay on bed..she lay with mixed emotions...he took her to arms and slowly start to cares her hair to make her sleep..she shiver feeling a cares on hair again...yes it's true..whatever she faced few minutes ago indeed true..she not get any hallucinations..it's truly happened..and that whisper..her body got electric shock recalling that whisper..it's indeed happens..she look at arnav who sleeping peacefully hugging her..she can't said all this to him..he will surely feel bad if she say such things happening to her in this house..he brought this palace with lot of love..if she say she feeling scared to be here..he will definitely feel bad..there only one option left..if there truly something happening here..she have to face it and need to prove arnav with strong proof.. But if there nothing like that or it's just her hallucinations she have to block these thoughts completely and need to spend her time happily here..with new determine she closed her eyes to get some relaxing sleep...little bit she know everything won't go according her wish in Rajput palace..here everything happens according to...................RAAZ.....................


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Dec 16

RAAZ..... (By Fathimasumaiya19) (Thanked: 36 times)

Next day..arnav decided to take khushi out today..she is very excited about it..soon they both left the palace after telling jamini to take leave....

He took her to mountain side..khushi amazed seeing the beautiful view of white mountains..it's truly amazing..both clicked photos together happily..after that he took her to more tourists places..they indeed loved their time together alone..both had their lunch in on of nice outdoor restaurant and keep sightseeing..when going to another place.khushi saw a mandir..she asked arnav to take her to mandir..he grant her demand and take a direction to mandir..both enter to temple..khushi smile in satisfaction meeting her devimayya after long time..he smile seeing her happy face..then both start to pray to God....

After finishing prayers both going back to car..khushi give some money to the beggars sitting there..suddenly on of old beggar hold her hand..she shocked by his act and try to free her hand..he is really old man with beard face..

khushi: what are you doing ? leave my hand..arnavji..

Arnav:( shocked seeing the scene) hey you..leave her hand..leave it I say!!

"PARVATI MAA " khushi look at him utterly shock hearing the way he calls her..he staring her with dead eyes and tighten the grip..arnav forcefully free her hand from his hold and took her away from there..she look behind him again and again..he keep staring her same way untill she left the place..he whispered looking the vanishing car ”Parvati”

Both reached to palace after exploring whole city..khushi reached to their room with lost thoughts..she still thinking about mandir incident..that old man look not gave her positive thoughts..he definitely looked her with hidden meaning..and the way he called her..she feel some uneasy on body..arnav thought to spend time with her more..but suddenly he got conference call to attend...he left to study room after telling her..she standing on balcony after getting changed into casual wear..when she lost on thoughts suddenly she notice a closed window of her room..she surprised seeing that..she didn't notice that past two days..it's last window of room..she move towards it and opened the window quickly..but she never expected she will get surprise after open it..she look out of window with wide eyes..there a house..a two story crystal design house..it exactly beside the palace..it's fully old house with ice covered everywhere..and she can clearly see anything if something happen inside that house..her mind getting mixer of emotions looking that house..unknowingly to her,her legs getting ready to run towards that house..her eyes twinkling with unnecessary excitement..right now she want to go inside that old ice covered house..she want to be there..but how can she go there..it's snowing heavily and somewhere deep inside her mind asking her to not to go there right now..when she try to think more suddenly she head loud noise from arnav's office room..she quickly rushed out..

She enter to office room worriedly..she saw he looking the broken mirror table with some unrecognisable expression..she came towards him..he jerked feeling her touch..soon after seeing her he hugged her tightly..she surprised by his behaviour..she sense he is tension..his body shivering exactly the way it shiver when he is highly got tension..after feeling he got calm down little she broke the hug and asked him softly.

Khushi: what happen arnavji? why you looking tension? and how this table break?

Arnav:( calm tone) it's nothing serious khushi..it's break accidentally..and I'm just tension regrading some office works..don't worry I'm okay..

she observe him keenly..she know he not telling truth..he hiding something..she thought to inquire about it later..right now she have to take care about him..she held him hand and him from messy room..he left the place after look back lastly..she asked jamini to clean the mess..

Both arnav and khushi having coffee standing in balcony..when both lost on peaceful silence suddenly he asked khushi in low tone..

Arnav: khushi don't you feeling there someone else present in this house apart from us ?

She jerked hearing his question..she give him shocking look..she never thought he will ask something like this..he still lost on outside view and waiting for her answer..

Khushi: you also feel that?

He look at her surprisingly hearing her return question ".he don't expect this return question..there same lost expression playing on her face..without denying he nodded to her question..she breath out a long breath at his node..both shared a little silence mood then he told her silently..

Arnav: maybe we feel like that because of new quite place..you know in Delhi we always used to be around many people..now suddenly we both alone in new place..maybe that's why..

Both try to convince their rushing brains..and somewhere it calmed..suddenly khushi remember something..quickly her face got bright..she hold his hand excitingly and told him super excitingly..

Khushi: arnavji I want to show you something..come with me..

before he ask what she pulled towards last window and showed him out..he viewed the view and got lost on the view..he look at the house with lost face..he asked her silently still being lost on that house..

Arnav: from where this house come?

Khushi:( excitedly) surprised na..I too saw this today only..it's been two days we come here,but I never saw this..but anyway..don't you think it's beautiful house?

Arnav:( lost voice) beautiful!!

Khushi: (pleading tone) arnavji I really want to go there..I want to see that house inside..please take me there..please please...

Arnav:( still lost on view) khushi how can we go there..it's belong to someone else..we can't go there without that owner permission..it's wrong thing..

She pout sadly hearing that..she really want to go there..it's something inside asking her to go..maybe the curiosity about exploring...when she try to ask him something.she notice he totally lost on that house..there some deep desperate longing showing on his face..she slowly placed hand on his arm.he jerked from thought and suddenly hugged her needy way..she highly surprised by his sudden movements..he nuzzles her neck and told her with husky tone..

Arnav: let's spend some time alone forgetting such a things...I need you right now,,

She blushed hearing his words..soon he took her to arms bridal style and move towards bed..after placing her on bed properly he removed his t-shirt on go.she gulp seeing his perfectly toned eight pack body..he still have the effect on her like first time..soon he come top her and explore the world of desire and intense...


Arnav pov..

I'm under big confusion or say sacredness..I still can't believe whatever happened to me in office room..how can I tell this to khushi..before telling how can I trust she will believe me if I say I feel someone hugged me from behind..I indeed feel that..when I talking on phone suddenly someone hugged me from behind..I thought it's was khushi.because I didn't feel the negative vibe I get whenever some other girl try to approach me apart from khushi..but when I turn to see there no one expect a white feather..how can this possible..I'm I hallucinating all this? It's big question mark..and I never tell this to khushi..from the time I enter to this palace I feels there someone else always around me..I feel it following everywhere like a shadow..but how is this possible..it's not that i believes all this as paranormal activity..but there truly something happening in this palace..how can I tell all this to khushi..won't she think about me weakly..maybe it's all because of our sudden alone living..but as far i  know it's won't effect this much..even khushi told she feels the same..it's mean these all indeed happily in real..and that house..why I feel that I know that house from long time..why I feel it's fully belong to me...there something like dynamic pulled me towards that house..what's all this mean..is it really hallucinations or something more then that? Whatever it is ,I need to get free from all those unwanted thoughts..those all really killing my mind..I can't spoil my time with khushi here..until we go from here I have to take the days smoothly without any problems..if it is hallucinations I have to focus on some other thing to avoid that..and I notice when khushi around me I'm not getting such a thoughts..it's good atleast she being normal here..before she come to know about all this I need to avoid all this fully..it's good for both of us....


Khushi opened her eyes feeling something unusual around her..she slowly got up and shocked seeing she sitting  totally different place from her room..and sitting hard floor and..she get up from the floor fearfully and look around for arnav..there no sigh of him..now this is nerve racking moment..how she come here..she supposed to be with her husband after having love making..but here all happening unusually..and what kind of place is this..this is not her palace..she look around the place alertly..then she notice this is a room..it's looking like it's not touched by anyone from years..and room little dark ,only two candles lighten in corner of room..she observe the room keenly..it's wide room with some old centuries chests..she slowly move towards it..there many chests neatly arranged in order..she observe all of it with new found of curiosity..she not feeling afraid anymore..she slowly cares it slowly.she turn and saw there more boxes and closets..she try to open  one box..when she lost on it suddenly she hear a noise..she turn with jerk..her quickness make her hit one pillar and there something from up fall on her..it's pot of ashes..she coughed suddenly having whole ashes on her and quickly wipe all of it from her body..all of sudden she hear most huskiness  voice she ever heard ..


She under the spell after hearing that voice..she body got paralysed..she got statue on spot after hearing that husky voice..but suddenly she hear another dangerous husky voice.


it's not that much attracting voice..there some dangerousness sensing on that voice..soon the room covered with full of voices..there many people voices start to hear..she feel like her brain going to burst..she covered her ears and screamed loudly..

”Khushi khushi come on open your eyes" she opened her eyes with gasps and saw arnav look her with worried face..she quickly got up and look around fearfully..she took  a heavy relief breath after seeing she saw on her room and all that only dream..he took her to comforting hug and asked her softly..

Arnav; what happened love ? why you screamed like that? 

khushi: I'm sorry arnavji..i saw a dream..its not that much nicer..I screamed out of fear..sorry for worrying you..

Arnav: that's okay sweetheart..I can see you getting so much nightmares nowadays..are you thinking about something new now days ?

she shook her head denying way..he hugged her back and caressed her hair to calm her nerves..she feeling huge calm after coming back to her husband arms..then she saw its already night..she sleep long..they need to have dinner..after calm down she got fresh up and went downstairs to have dinner with arnav...after she left behind her there ashes falling from ceiling... it wiped by an smoky hand..


Hi darlings how is today episode of raaz ?

What you all think about those activities ?

Unexpectedly it's even happening with arnav.what you all this about it?

What is the connection arshi  have with this palace?

Is there any guesses darlings ?

Tell me on comment section what you all thinking and gusseing..

If anyone want mature staffs of arshi tell me then I can write much intense hotter way..

Next update depends on this update votes and comments..don't take it lightly I'm damn serious..tomorrow I'll update unique devil Angel..don't forget to check it..

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Fabulous update
Feb 5

Raaz......next episode is up. (By Fathimasumaiya19) (Thanked: 24 times)

It's quite snowy day,,khushi sitting outside the house and having hot chocolate milk made by jamini..it's really nice cool day..but sadly arnav not here to enjoy the cool view..he left to construction side to look after some works..he informed her,he will reach at dinner time..she feeling really bored without doing anything..after doing remaining works jamini left the palace..now just khushi present in whole palace area..she thought to call her family..but the damn network not working properly today cause of snowy weather..she thought to take a look around the estate..but she unsure about going alone in unknown place..she thought to play a game on phone to kill her bore..when she got into the game,suddenly there an milky white dove came from nowhere and sit front of her..first she didn't notice that..then her eyes fell on it,,she amused seeing such a beautiful dove in this cold place..it's really beautiful..there something different about it..when she lost on observing that,suddenly it caught her saree pallu and start to fly forward..she totally shocked by it action..she try to free her pallu from it mouth..but to her surprise the dove holding her pallu tightly..cause of her this attention to pallu she didn't notice where this dove taking her..finally after long time it's free her pallu,,she stopped running and took long breath..just now she realised all the time she came running..after getting back normal breaths she look around to see where this dove bring her..but next second her breath stopped seeing the view front of her..she blinked her eyes twice to see is she dreaming or it's truly happening...

She look at the old two story house with blank expression..the same house she saw from her bedroom..the same house she wished to go desperately..it's like some illusion to her..cause how can she come to the exact place she wished to go..that to without her knowledge..she look around clearly and come to know she much away from palace..almost fifteen meter..and she look for that dove which bring her here..soon her mind just got focus on the house front of her..she really want to go inside..but the same time little nervous about going..she try to look for someone..looking like there no one present in house..and the house giving her inviting vibes..without think more she took step forward to house..she feel some kind of vibration passed on her body when she hold that house game,,it's too old gate..it's make sounds when she open it..after taking long breath she took step towards house..suddenly silence surrender around the area..there no one expect she..finally she reached to door step..she observe the door keenly..the whole design of house and door designs of late 40s or 70s..sge slowly cares the gothic design door,but she took two step back out of fear seeing the door slowly got open...she surprised about it..how this house being  unlock..is there anyone present inside? she thought to make a ring..

Khushi: is anybody home? (no answer) hello is anyone there?

She frown seeing she not get any reply back..that's means there no one inside..after encouraging herself she slowly keep the first step inside the house..she don't know after this she going to see totally unexpected things...

Khushi standing middle of the house and take a look around the house..there no lights..just day time light falling inside the house through windows..she can't deny,the house is really amazing..it's might be build 60 or 80 years ago..cause she can't see some British touch on the house..but even she see there some Indian touch too..the way furnitures arranged..house decorations showing the Indian touch..she saw its quite big house..it's looking like small house from out,but inside it's really big..almost like some mansion..soon she took closer look of every things there..it's worth to see,cause every things there have expensive and exclusive looks..she feeling really excited to see them..she wonders who's this house owner..wherever it is,have excellent taste of design..when she lost on admiring things..suddenly she hear a loud noise from upstair..she jerked hearing the unexpected sounds..it's noise like something fallen down..she wondered what is might be happen upstair..before thinking more,she run upstairs to see what exactly that sound..

Upstair there a room which tightly closed by chest filled sodden door..it's looking really old with dirty dust..and there another room opposite to it..surprisingly it's wildly open and it's too covered with dust..there something blinking inside the room..not blinking it's brighting cause of day light..she slowly keep step inside the house..it's looking like their no one enter inside this room from centuries...she try to look closer the room..it's might be looking like some tornado attached..but she can imagine how much this room must be beautiful early..there a queen size bed with old side net top of it..beside that one side table with old vase..and other side there a cupboard almost seven feet..and beside that there many chests like boxes arranged neatly..and beside that there a dressing table with short stool like chair..when she look around for more suddenly some green light touched her face..she closed her eyes feeling sudden light and try to look from where it's coming..when she look around she saw that light coming from dressing table on of locker..it's coming out from key hole..she wondered what is inside that locker which blinking this much even from such a small hole..she quickly reached to dressing table and hurriedly open the locker..but sadly it's locked..she feel sad and irritated..soon she try to look for that locker keys..she put a search on whole room..but she didn't finds anywhere..finally she reached to cupboard.luckily it's not opened...after opening that first thing she saw clutch of keys..she took it on hands and wondered what is that lockers key..then she saw there some small keys too..she quickly start to check small keys on locker..after fifths key she heard the clicked sounds..she feel happy about her try and quickly opened that locker..next second she closed her eyes tightly feeling raw brightness from inside..she can't even open her eyes fully cause of it brightness..then she adjusted to light and slowly try to see what exactly on this locker..but next moment she totally mesmerised by the view front of her..

There a emerald green thick ring placed neatly on designed box..it's looking extremely gorgeous with extraordinary design..she never seen such a gorgeous ring on her entire life..she slowly took that from box and observe it more closer..she feel some kind of emotions rising inside her seeing this ring..she feeling so excited and happy..she feeling like she got back something so precious to her which she lost it long before..currently there nothing on her mind expect this..she feeling so relief and same time so happy..her mind arguing to wear this ring..even she want to wear this ring desperately...without thinking more she wear the ring on her right hand ring finger..to her shock and surprise it's fitted on her finger so perfectly..it's almost looking like it's just made for her..when she lost on admiring the ring suddenly she hear loud screaming sound from opposite room..she goes up in highly shock and immediately turn to see it with terrific expression..but there no one..the door still looking same..suddenly she start to feel tension..she totally terrified by that woman scream..yes it's was an women scream..she quickly run out of the room and rushed downstair..soon she came out from house and took a run towards her house..cause of tension and fear she forget to remove the ring from her finger which blinking on her finger after getting back to the rightful person..

At night...arnav khushi having dinner silently on dining room..from the beginning arnav observed she looking little tension about something..there some fear line crossing on her face..after waited so long he try to ask her what happened..but he got blank expression on his face when he saw brightly blinking emerald ring on her finger..he frown seeing that ring..

arnav: khushi from where you got this ring? as far I remember I never purchased this ring for you..

Just now khushi realised she wearing this ring all the time..even she surprised seeing that..then she remember she forgot to remove this ring when she rushed out of house..arnav waiting for her reply..then she told him sheepishly hiding her embarrassment..

Khushi: woh arnavji..I got this ring from that old house..you know the house beside our house..I got this from there..

arnav:( shocked voice) what!! You went to that house..why don't you tell me..what if you get into any problem on my absence..

Khushi:( defence voice) arnavji trust me,I didn't plan to go that house..I don't know how to tell you..I went to that house dragged by some dove..it's just took me there..I just mean to go..after going there I can't able to control myself from look that house from inside..but I swear I didn't got into any troubles..in fact  no one living there..it's really old house which untouched from many years..

He sigh seeing her baby doll face..then he went to sit beside her..he took her hand and take a look of that ring keenly..he caressed the ring and told her highly surprised way..

Arnav: khushi it's not any fashionable covering ring..it's truly made by emerald green diamond..do you know how much this ring cost..it's almost cost millions.. But how can someone keep such a expensive ring on that old house..khushi I think you should remove this ring and keep it on same place where you take this..I'm not feeling good about this ring..

Khushi: arnavji I don't mean to bring this ring here..i forgot to remove this ring when I came out..just now even I realised..don't worry I'll remove this and together we both can keep this ring back on that house..wait let me remove it..

saying that she try to remove that..to her shock it's not moving a inch from her ring..she look at arnav with worried face and told him worriedly..

Khushi: arnavji I can't remove this ring from my finger..please help me to remove it..

he nodded and try to remove the ring without hurting her..but to his shock it's not coming out of her finger..both have same worry on face.after sometime he give up on removing this..he took a long sigh and told her little playfully..

Arnav: maybe this ring don't like to came out from your finger..let it be..who know its might be written to you..

She smile hearing him.then both continue have the remaining food..but without her knowledge arnav looking the ring with mixed emotions..honestly it's looking nice on her long finger..but he feeling something else when he look at that ring on her finger..he can't correctly said what he exactly feeling..then after finishing dinner both left to their room..when they getting ready to sleep ,suddenly arnav told her..

Arnav: khushi I too want to go that house..lets go tomorrow..let me see what you finding so interested on that house..

She surprised hearing him..then she told him excited and challenging way..

Khushi: you will come to know arnavji.you don't know how much that house way interesting.there many interesting and beautiful things to see.specially that room..today I don't got chance to see whole house..tomorrow with you I can see everything..I bet you won't get disappointed...

He look at her with smile and pull her towards him..then both got settled on bed..like usual he roundly took her to arms ,then both slowly drift off to sleep..the emerald ring slowly start to blink like an heart beating...how much he try no one can remove this ring from her finger as its first path to near the raaz...


Please read my darlings:: sorry for late update..this time there no cousin wedding or fever reasons..my bad luck my family members looking alliance for me..can you imagine I'm just eighteen years old and my family members finding this is right time for me to get married..this time they very serious about it..guys please pray for me..I don't want to get married now..I have many dreams about my stories..I want to achieve something great on my writing skills..please guys I don't want to marry..I don't want to do anything expect writing..please pray for me guys...

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